This felt like a spell — the way you let her dance blur shadow and desire, danger and delight. I love how your lines pull us into that liminal space where whimsy becomes peril, and yet we still want to follow. Enchanting and sharp all at once.
Liora, this is mesmerizing. The way you weave shadow, moonlight, and movement creates a presence that’s almost tangible seductive, dangerous, and impossible to look away from. I felt the pulse of her rhythm and the pull of her gaze through every line. Beautifully dark and intoxicating. ✨
Thank you 💜 I really love this one and how it turned out. Crazy but writing it, I felt that irresistible pull I’m describing. Driven. I’m glad it found you in that space.
Beautiful words. I am just getting into poetry at 61!! Trying to catch up. It really seems to speak to me now, maybe it's because my life is slower and I have time to absorb the words and feel the meaning 💖
I completely understand that! I’ve always been an avid reader, but am new to writing and sharing my work. It’s honestly one of the best choices I’ve made for my happiness💜
Exactly! It’s never too late and I’ll tell you, once I started, the words have just kept on flowing. It’s been so fulfilling. And this community is absolutely amazing! Wonderful and talented writers that will keep you thinking and engaged💜
Very vivid – silver dripping, raven hair, bells, gardens jealous of lips. It mixes natural and mystical images to paint her as both enchanting and dangerous. 🤍🩶🖤
@Annaiah love ❤️ talk Thanks so much for sharing my work. I truly appreciate it💜
Thanks for the restack @Amanda Izzo, I appreciate you lady!
This made me swoon 🫶 you’re amazing!
This felt like a spell — the way you let her dance blur shadow and desire, danger and delight. I love how your lines pull us into that liminal space where whimsy becomes peril, and yet we still want to follow. Enchanting and sharp all at once.
Thank you so much! I felt the inspiration while on my ride and it pulled something fierce. I’m really happy that sensation translated well to you 💜
Liora, this is mesmerizing. The way you weave shadow, moonlight, and movement creates a presence that’s almost tangible seductive, dangerous, and impossible to look away from. I felt the pulse of her rhythm and the pull of her gaze through every line. Beautifully dark and intoxicating. ✨
Thank you 💜 I really love this one and how it turned out. Crazy but writing it, I felt that irresistible pull I’m describing. Driven. I’m glad it found you in that space.
Liora! So lovely. You really do have a gift. I’m adding this to my favorites list. Thank you for sharing.🦋💚
Thanks so much Kristin! My dear friend, happy Friday 💜
Beautiful words. I am just getting into poetry at 61!! Trying to catch up. It really seems to speak to me now, maybe it's because my life is slower and I have time to absorb the words and feel the meaning 💖
I completely understand that! I’ve always been an avid reader, but am new to writing and sharing my work. It’s honestly one of the best choices I’ve made for my happiness💜
I agree, same feeling here. As a young girl I dreamed of becoming a writer some day, well, better late than never!! 😊
Exactly! It’s never too late and I’ll tell you, once I started, the words have just kept on flowing. It’s been so fulfilling. And this community is absolutely amazing! Wonderful and talented writers that will keep you thinking and engaged💜
Love the imagery!
Thank you Chris!💜
Very vivid – silver dripping, raven hair, bells, gardens jealous of lips. It mixes natural and mystical images to paint her as both enchanting and dangerous. 🤍🩶🖤
Thanks so much for reading! I had some fun with this one: the idea for it sparked while I was out on a ride and followed me home💜
stunning 🫶🫶🫶
Thank you so much 💜
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This is so beautifull…I always love the way you write…full of rhythm full of emotions!
Thank you so much. This is one I could hear a melody underneath it. Started on a ride💜