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Liora Writes's avatar

@Annaiah love ❤️ talk Thanks so much for sharing my work. I truly appreciate it💜

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Thanks for the restack @Amanda Izzo, I appreciate you lady!

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This made me swoon 🫶 you’re amazing!

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Oh hell yeah, this made me smile 💜 thanks Amanda!

Sal's avatar

Take your eyes off Liora for a second and you might miss a lifetime of adventure. @Liora Writes keep at it my friend. You are killing it.

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You have no idea how much that means, Sal. I thought you’d gone quiet for a while—it’s good to see you around again. Your words always hit at the right time. Thank you, truly.💜

KFitz's avatar

This felt like a spell — the way you let her dance blur shadow and desire, danger and delight. I love how your lines pull us into that liminal space where whimsy becomes peril, and yet we still want to follow. Enchanting and sharp all at once.

Liora Writes's avatar

Thank you so much! I felt the inspiration while on my ride and it pulled something fierce. I’m really happy that sensation translated well to you 💜

Marlana's avatar

Liora, this is mesmerizing. The way you weave shadow, moonlight, and movement creates a presence that’s almost tangible seductive, dangerous, and impossible to look away from. I felt the pulse of her rhythm and the pull of her gaze through every line. Beautifully dark and intoxicating. ✨

Liora Writes's avatar

Thank you 💜 I really love this one and how it turned out. Crazy but writing it, I felt that irresistible pull I’m describing. Driven. I’m glad it found you in that space.

Kristin Meadows's avatar

Liora! So lovely. You really do have a gift. I’m adding this to my favorites list. Thank you for sharing.🦋💚

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Thanks so much Kristin! My dear friend, happy Friday 💜

Dana VonAllmen's avatar

Beautiful words. I am just getting into poetry at 61!! Trying to catch up. It really seems to speak to me now, maybe it's because my life is slower and I have time to absorb the words and feel the meaning 💖

Liora Writes's avatar

I completely understand that! I’ve always been an avid reader, but am new to writing and sharing my work. It’s honestly one of the best choices I’ve made for my happiness💜

Dana VonAllmen's avatar

I agree, same feeling here. As a young girl I dreamed of becoming a writer some day, well, better late than never!! 😊

Liora Writes's avatar

Exactly! It’s never too late and I’ll tell you, once I started, the words have just kept on flowing. It’s been so fulfilling. And this community is absolutely amazing! Wonderful and talented writers that will keep you thinking and engaged💜

Chris B. Writes's avatar

Love the imagery!

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Thank you Chris!💜

M3Cents's avatar

Very vivid – silver dripping, raven hair, bells, gardens jealous of lips. It mixes natural and mystical images to paint her as both enchanting and dangerous. 🤍🩶🖤

Liora Writes's avatar

Thanks so much for reading! I had some fun with this one: the idea for it sparked while I was out on a ride and followed me home💜

pm's avatar

stunning 🫶🫶🫶

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Thank you so much 💜

Hina Gondal's avatar

This is so beautifull…I always love the way you write…full of rhythm full of emotions!

Liora Writes's avatar

Thank you so much. This is one I could hear a melody underneath it. Started on a ride💜