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Kristin Meadows's avatar

I am so proud you are taking on another direction in your writing. 💚 I’m excited to see how this all evolves.

Liora Writes's avatar

Thanks Kristin! Definitely more to come💜

nibbins the cat's avatar

Off to a strong start with this one. Nasty, brutish and short - just how I like them

Liora Writes's avatar

Nice! Glad to hear it!

Moonbeam Fleur Claw's avatar

Love this so much! Grit with heart. Can't wait to read more.

Liora Writes's avatar

Thank you! Exactly my aim 💜

Carousel Carrusel by Alisha's avatar

This Chapter 1 set-up HOOKED me!

Liora Writes's avatar

Thanks so much, Alisha! Your words mean a lot. Hoping to keep you hooked!💜

Carousel Carrusel by Alisha's avatar

I am certain you will 🤪

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Sep 27, 2025
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Liora Writes's avatar

Hey! Appreciate you! I’m polishing Ch. 2 now and aiming for Tuesday morning. I’ll announce in Notes the moment it’s up.

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Sep 22, 2025
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Liora Writes's avatar

Hey thanks for the feedback! I truly appreciate it. This is a project in current development and I’m certainly no expert either! I’m very open to constructive criticism that can make it better💜

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Sep 22, 2025
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Liora Writes's avatar

Thank you so much! 💜