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Liora Writes's avatar

Thanks so much for sharing my work @Seajade! You’re amazing 💜

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Seajade's avatar

You’re welcome Liora, 😊

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Hina Gondal's avatar

OMG creepy....it was different but i like it!

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Liora Writes's avatar

Yeah definitely darker, but naming something that has or has had power over you, I feel, is the first step toward taking that power back. Glad you like it💜

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Outtamydamnmind 🧷's avatar

Liora, this hit me hard. The way you gave fear a presence, a form that stalks and twists reality it’s raw and vivid. I could feel that tension and the way it gnaws at trust, even as you push to reclaim it. Thank you for sharing this so openly; it’s brave and beautiful. Your note at the end reminds me that even when fear feels constant, there’s space to rewrite the story and your words do that for the rest of us, too. 💜

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Liora Writes's avatar

Thanks so much, I caught myself toying with lesser fears, low-hanging fruit, as it were. I’m glad that when I started writing, the truest one came out. I do mean what I said, you all are helping me in immeasurable ways. So thank you💜

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KFitz's avatar

Haunting and beautifully crafted. The way you gave mistrust a body — shadow hair, glowing eyes, whispers that bind — made it feel like a force we’ve all met. What struck me most was your honesty in the author’s note: that survival twist of “never trust anyone” and the quiet work of rewriting it. Shadow and hope braided together — powerful.

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