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Hina Gondal's avatar

I am in love with your writing style... beautiful ❤️

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Liora Writes's avatar

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words 💜

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KFitz's avatar

What a powerful closing — tender, haunting, and hopeful all at once. The way you turned neglected characters into “ghosts” asking to be seen was such a sharp metaphor, and that final turn back to the muse felt like a quiet resurrection. I especially loved the image of setting the phone aside and choosing the page instead — a reclaiming of self that rang true.

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Joakim Blytt's avatar

Liora managed to pull something rare here: a horror story that pivots into recognition, where grief and hope end up holding hands. That’s not just craft, that’s vision. A fitting, and quietly powerful, closing chapter 🙏🏻

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