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Joakim Blytt's avatar

I love how this spun from “weird customer” into full-on metafiction horror. That moment Weiss called out his own leather jacket in summer was gold 👌🏻

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Liora Writes's avatar

Right back at you—your work is chef’s kiss. Loving the collab energy too!

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Joakim Blytt's avatar

Oh stop! it’s only getting started 🔥

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Liora Writes's avatar

Sweet! Count me in😄

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Maurice Antoine Redwine's avatar

...completely blind-sided me, too. {But, secretly, I'm glad because I spook easy. Hah. ...glad it isn't a complete Horror Story. [Right, Liori?]}

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Liora Writes's avatar

I think you’ll enjoy the rest of it, Maurice 💜

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Maurice Antoine Redwine's avatar

Oh, man! Sarah has SOME gall...giggling(?!) after all of THAT?! I hope That Giggle will help her explain leaving The Store unlocked to Her Boss. SMH

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Liora Writes's avatar

Haha! I don’t know about you but I can’t say I would’ve thought about it one bit in that moment🤣

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Maurice Antoine Redwine's avatar

I know, but I'm just "saying". She has Some Nerve! That premonition, or whatever It was...was even shocked, asking, "Are you still mocking me?" [...or something like that.] I don't know about Sarah. I'll have to read and see if she's come to terms with everything being some sort of "in my head" manifestation or not. SMH

Whatever's going on, The Story's keeping My Interest. 😉

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Liora Writes's avatar

Haha true, I can see how it comes across that way. For me, I was lost in her breakdown. If I was in her shoes, I’d probably think I was either hallucinating or in a coma or something. I’d probably unconsciously giggle, too! Glad it’s holding your interest — I had a lot of fun writing this one 😄

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Maurice Antoine Redwine's avatar

Oh, no! You're a I'm-in-trouble-it's-totally-okay-to-giggle-r? Hahaha

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Liora Writes's avatar

Hey, sometimes it’s either break down or giggle 🤣

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