What a gorgeous series of haiku! I love the progression. Just beautiful. And it's lovely to see you writing on Substack more often lately. 💛
Thanks to Substack, I've written countless haiku in the past couple of months, and like you said, they're quite addictive. As far as the season I'm in, even though it was 90 °F (32.22 °C) today, I still feel like I'm in a winter season, but I can feel spring is on the way.
So wonderful to hear from you too, Kristina! I love your poem 💜 This winter has been a bit strange my way, a lot of back and forth and little snow. But I know exactly what you mean. I’m thawing and can feel spring in the air (literally and figuratively). Choosing to lean///
I love your haikus! Well, your writing, period. I’ve been in a cognitive overload after a deep fog recently, but am trying to carve out time to read more on here. Need to see what you’ve been up to, my friend 💜
I definitely have to get back to this, thank you for the mention Liora!
Sweet! Can’t wait💜
What a gorgeous series of haiku! I love the progression. Just beautiful. And it's lovely to see you writing on Substack more often lately. 💛
Thanks to Substack, I've written countless haiku in the past couple of months, and like you said, they're quite addictive. As far as the season I'm in, even though it was 90 °F (32.22 °C) today, I still feel like I'm in a winter season, but I can feel spring is on the way.
A haiku inspired by yours:
I’m starting to thaw.
I’m waking up, but groggy.
Rebirth is at hand.
So wonderful to hear from you too, Kristina! I love your poem 💜 This winter has been a bit strange my way, a lot of back and forth and little snow. But I know exactly what you mean. I’m thawing and can feel spring in the air (literally and figuratively). Choosing to lean///
"Shrimped-up"-- ha! Hadn't heard that one before. 🍤 Nice work! 👍
Thanks! Haha, I have to credit my kid with the inspiration—he calls the cat a “shrimp” when he’s lying, circled. Once you see it… lol.
Haiku's 2, 6, and 9 were really good! Thank you for sharing.
Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed them💜
Love a great haiku series like this one. Great writing!
Thanks! I usually write more long form poetry. I honestly sat down to write one. But, I have to admit, it’s kind of addictive.
Thank for the mention. I am deep into winter. Seasonally and mentally.
I will see if maybe your kind nudge and spark gets my haiku blooming.
Good to read your words. Brilliant as always.
I love your haikus! Well, your writing, period. I’ve been in a cognitive overload after a deep fog recently, but am trying to carve out time to read more on here. Need to see what you’ve been up to, my friend 💜
Awww that's stunning, so amazing haikus...😇😇😇Your words carrying seasons..the flavours😇😇
Thanks a lot for the beautiful mention😇
I was fried! Such a heavy lift project for school. Peeked on here, saw your tag and thought “why not?”
So thank you; it not only inspired me but also cleared that clutter feeling 💜
You’re such a brilliant writer💙Your words are proof💙💙💙
Lots of love💙💙