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Carlos Morales 🇨🇷's avatar

Beautiful poetry Liora.

You tap into the soul of objects and through your words reveal the memories they keep. The meter and rhyme scheme has a rhythm that's reflective and makes you feel the weight in every word and every memory.

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Gary L Taylor's avatar

I like the way that it guides us from those objects through the memories and thoughts of those lost, to a resolution to push on and move into the day, into life.

Very good stuff, indeed.

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